I'm at page 23 and just re-read certain things and ... it's boring a shit. I like the idea, but it's not working out for me. It's not K/S. They'd have more fun slamming their car into a brick wall. I'm seriously considering writing in Luc too, that's how boring it is. (Okay, I would NEVER write in Luc on purpose, so don't panic.)
So, either I re-write 60% of the story. (I like the first 9-10 pages)
Or I start anew. (Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Or I write K/S original but I have no clue how to get them alone AND in a Christmassy-place (I mean, Chad can only have so many houses, right?) ....
And Halloween hasn't even happened yet.