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Fanfic: Trust 
10th-Jan-2011 06:26 pm
kevin/scotty argue


By Marea67
Rate: NC-17-ish
Disclaimer: Too bad they aren’t mine, I would NOT have come up with THAT stupid idea.
Summary: Guilty? - Happens prior to 5.05

Extra: I could have SWORN that I had posted this here somewhere, but I can't find anywhere (maybe I integrated it in another story?) 


“No. Please, don’t stop! Don’t stop….” Scotty whispers, eyes closed tightly, his hands in Kevin’s hair. Kevin’s fingers replace his mouth on Scotty’s cock. Scotty shakes his head. He’s so close. He can feel Kevin’s stubble on his belly. Kevin’s lips caress his skin. Scotty moans softly.

This is what he loves and hates the most at the same time: Kevin keeping him on the edge, but not letting him go over it. He wants the release, but it also means an end to Kevin’s torturing tenderness, that tenderness Scotty cannot get enough of. He moves faster underneath Kevin’s fingers.

His words are no longer coherent. Kevin’s teeth scrape the sensitive skin. The soft pain makes Scotty buck up, but it’s not enough to make him come. His breathing speeds up, between his eyelashes he can see the victorious smile on Kevin’s face. God, he looks so good, when he’s this confident. Scotty closes his eyes again.

The image of Kevin in charge of his body and controlling him, turns him on, fans the flames inside him. Scotty holds his breath as Kevin takes him over the edge. His body shakes with release of the strain Scotty kept on it. His moan is softer than usual, he’s out of breath.

He feels Kevin’s arms around him. It’s such a warm little place to be. He feels so safe and loved there. He shifts by turning to his side. Kevin caresses his back with slow, long movements and Scotty feels he could fall asleep like that. Just keep his eyes closed and drift off to world of dreams.

But reality sets in, when Kevin moves by reaching out for the clock over the bed.
“Nearly two.” He hums. “I have a client at two-thirty and I want to take a shower first.”
Scotty can feel that Kevin is just reluctant to let him go as Scotty is.
“Two more minutes.” Scotty begs softly.

Kevin kisses his hair and lets the back of his fingers brush along Scotty’s cheek.
“Can’t. I have to prepare.” He then says and pushes away the sheets. Scotty knows he needs to accept, that the little moment of intimacy is over.
“Anything big?” He asks.

“I’m not sure. I got a it a few weeks ago, but the woman kept cancelling her appointments. I only browsed through it, when I got it. Which is why I need to refresh my memory before she gets in... If she hasn’t cancelled on me again... Sad case... Husband’s a cheater, had two other girlfriends, one of them pregnant... Sad...”

Kevin has gathered all his clothes and is ready to go the bathroom, but not before he kisses Scotty softly.
“It’s cases like this that make me happy to come home to you. I know I can trust you.” Kevin whispers, then he kisses Scotty again and he moves to the bathroom and Kevin does not see the desperation, that his words have left on Scotty’s face.


10th-Jan-2011 06:20 pm (UTC)
Oh God! I lile it, but what I like more is this:

and Kevin does not see the desperation, that his words have left on Scotty’s face.

So well written :)
10th-Jan-2011 09:23 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I guess I want some 'prequel' to the nonsense that started in 5.05. I just never felt/saw/had the idea that Scotty felt 'guilty' over anything. I guess some more 'hints' would have been appreciated.

10th-Jan-2011 09:25 pm (UTC)
same here! i love the prequel thing too, i love it how fics fill the blanks in the episodes now!! and it gives Scotty a reason to decide to confess.
10th-Jan-2011 09:34 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I know that some felt that 'looking back' they could have seen it coming, but I just did NOT and I KNEW it would happen. I kept looking for 'something', even if just behind Kevin's back, but somehow it's just not there, not for me anyway.

And Luke Macfarlane is a good actor, if he SHOULD have dropped some subtle hints, he would have done it. I can understand that it had to hit to KEVIN out of the blue, but even knowing that it would come I was more flabbergasted than Kevin was!

I know, I shouldn't let it bother me anymore.... but it does. :)

Edited at 2011-01-10 09:35 pm (UTC)
10th-Jan-2011 09:49 pm (UTC)
I like this story, shows what should have happened on the show. There should have been some hints. but nada! Scotty's cheating came out of norwhere. I still think the writers were in la la land the day they wrote that script.
10th-Jan-2011 10:35 pm (UTC)
Whatever they were smoking must have been pretty strong. ;D

Thanks for liking it.
10th-Jan-2011 11:38 pm (UTC)
Very nice stuff, will be watching Season 5 next week
11th-Jan-2011 01:15 pm (UTC)
Good luck with that. I'm curious to read what you think about the episodes.
11th-Jan-2011 12:23 am (UTC)
I do agree that Scotty should have shown some remorse or guilt. Sure they showed they were having 'problems' but nothing he did suggested that he'd cheated. I'm not sure if it was Sarah's troubles that day or Kevin's declaration that brought it out but it doesnt really matter. This is a great story. Im sorry my foul mood seems to be carrying over into all my comments.
11th-Jan-2011 01:17 pm (UTC)
I agree. Very frustrating. I hope you're feeling better. :)
11th-Jan-2011 09:31 pm (UTC)
I am some thank you. And thanks for being willing to listen. That really means a lot.
27th-Jan-2011 01:26 pm (UTC)
There's still a certain....loneliness? to this? They are intimate but still distant if that makes sense....Great job!
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